Short As A Flash

Wrote out a wordy post. Deleted it. The point is to keep it short, they say. Been put off flash fiction by this Guardian article. B-)

But was inspired by Hemingway’s Six:

For Sale. Baby Shoes. Never Worn.

My debut flash fiction effort:

I didn’t think we’d last forever. Now, we say, “I do”. Here on, every new day ought to be shorter than forever.

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3 thoughts on “Short As A Flash”

    1. aww, thanks. That phase was really as “Short as a Flash”! Long gone! 🙂

      This here is essentially my take on forever. Break it up and deal with little squares that don’t matter 🙂 Myeh! Now that’s plain morose, no?

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